First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I hope that I can be a excellent English teacher. I just wanna improve my English level here as well as make some friends .
I was brought up in Yunnan,China. I love many many new popular things..
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I hope that I can be an excellent English teacher. I just wanna [no slang, remember you are a teacher] want to improve my English level here as well as and to make some friends.
I was brought grew [nothing wrong with what you write, but this is the more common way of saying.] up in Yunnan,_China. I love many many new and popular things... [or you can just say, "I love fads"]
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Well... that's pretty good English, although it's only a few sentences. 你是英文老师？
One comment.... usually when we use multiple adjectives, for example - the new, fancy sports car - here both new and fancy describe the car. We usually separate them, either with a comma or sometimes the word "and" when the adjectives are very different.
:-)
Alex
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