WHAT A RELIEF!

Yesterday I got up early in the morning. It was Saturday. thought I was free all day and did not have any appointments, so I decided to enjoy the day by myself. First I did some gardening while listening to music. Then I ordered lunch and it was delivered at the right time. I took it and it was so delicious. After that I took a nap for an hour. I woke up at 5.p.m and decided to go shopping. Actually, I did not need to buy anything but because it was a long time since I had been shopping, I left my house towards the shopping center. I was passing shops and looking at some beautiful shoes and clothes and I was about to buy a dress, when suddenly my cellphone rang. Guess who it was. It was my manager .As I saw his number I remembered I had a meeting at my workplace with my manager and co-workers. I Was so afraid of answering his call because my manager is so strict. Finally I answered his phone and I was about to say " so sorry, I am sick and I can't come" but my manager said " are you on your way to the office? I am so sorry, I forgot to call you to say our meeting is postponed until next Saturday ". I was so happy that I told him that it was OK .
WHAT A RELIEF !

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WHAT A RELIEF!

Yesterday I wake up early in the morning. It was Saturday. I thought I am free all the day. (and did not have any appointments)(this sentence make wordy)So, I decided to enjoy my day by myself. First, I did gardening while listening the music. Then I ordered lunch and it was delivered at the right time. I took it and it was so delicious . After that I took a nap for an hour. I woke up at 5.p.m and decided to go shopping .Actually, I did not need  to buy any thing. However it was a long time. So I had not been to shopping centers and I left my house towards shopping center . I was passing shops and looking at some beautiful shoes and clothes. I was about to buy a dress ,suddenly I got a call. Guess who was it. It was my manager. When I saw his number, I remembered that I had a meeting at my work place with my manager and co-workers. I Was so afraid of answering his call because my manager is so strict .Finally, I answered his call. When I was about to say " so sorry I am sick and I could not come" suddenly, my manager said " are you on the way? I am so sorry I forgot to call you about the meeting. It is postponed until next Saturday " .I was so happy to hear and told him that was ok . 

WHAT A RELIEF !

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