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Red Hair Discrimination?
Hello everyone. I had a job interview today (no need to use a perfect tense here, since you say a specific time (today)) in one of the supermarkets in my town. I thought it was going really good, until the manager told me that my hair colour is against their policy. My hair is dyed in bright red. Yes, it is bright, but not fluorescent or tomato red. The manager told me that I would have to change my hair colour in order to work at their company. What a joke! It's not like I'm coming to work with a fluorescent green mohawk on my head, right? I don't understand how can my red hair can (better: would) insult the (don't need "the" here, but it's okay as is) customers or even my fellow co-workers? I wonder what the manager would think if I showed her my tattoos...
I'm really disappointed.
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Very, very good submission. Just some minor word order corrections and grammar points.
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