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I would like to talk about cars. I like cars, because they are one of the thing that makes us go to a destination faster .But i haven't got a driving license. I plan to go abroad so I would probably get a license after I come back. my dad has a Toyota Highlander, it is a midsize crossover SUV . Its performance is excellent, and it is really fast . But i really don't think i can afford to buy a brand new car as a student, you know , the petrol , insurance , maintenance fees. If possible ,I would probably choose to buy a second-hand stang. If I could drive It would be more convenient to drivemyself than to take public transport, especially for traveling. It is always troublesome to find the route or bus number in a city which is totally new to you . In the case of driving , a gps device is almost everything I need. I prefer to travel with a friend . But if it doesn't happen then travelling alone would be the alternative . I don't like being in the car for too many hours at a time. It would be nice to stop off every hour for cup of tea or break.

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I would like to talk about cars.

I like cars, because they are one of the thing that allows us to get somewhere faster . I haven't got a driving license. I plan to go abroad so I would probably get a license after I come back.
My dad has a Toyota Highlander, it is a midsize crossover SUV . Its performance is excellent, and it is really fast .
But i really don't think i can afford to buy a brand new car as a student, you know , the petrol, insurance, maintenance fees. If possible, I would probably choose to buy a second-hand stang (stang??).
If I could drive It would be more convenient to drive myself than to take public transport, especially for traveling. It is always troublesome to find the route or bus number in a city which is totally new to you . In the case of driving , a gps device is almost everything I need.
I prefer to travel with a friend . But if it doesn't happen then travelling alone would be the alternative .
I don't like being in the car for too many hours at a time. It would be nice to stop off every hour for cup of tea or break.

 

One thing you need to know if you never start a sentense with 'and' or 'but'.

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I would like to talk about cars.

I like cars, because they are one of the thing that makes us go to a destination faster. But i haven't got a driving license, and I plan to go abroad so I would probably get a license after I come back.
my dad has a Toyota Highlander, a midsize crossover SUV ,whose performance is excellent, and it is really fast .
But i really don't think i can afford to buy a brand new car as a student, you know , the petrol , insurance ,and maintenance fees. If possible ,I would probably choose to buy a second-hand stang.
If I could drive, it would be more convenient to drive by myself than to take public transport, especially for traveling. It is always troublesome to find the route or bus number in a city, where is totally new to you . In the case of driving , a gps device is almost everything I need.
I prefer to traveling with a friend . But if it did not  happen, then travelling alone could be the alternative .
I don't like being in the car for too many hours at a time. It would be nice to stop off every hour for cup of tea or break.

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