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Hard Feelings
A story tells that of two friends were walking through the desert. During some point of the journey, they had an argument. and one friend One slapped the other one in the face. The one who got was slapped was felt hurt, but and without saying a word, she [Men don't slap each other in the face. They would punch. So if you want to use male characters, don't use slap.] anything, wrote in the sand, "TODAY MY BEST FRIEND SLAPPED ME IN THE FACE!"
They kept on walking until they found an oasis, where they decided to refresh themselves in the water take a bath. The one, who had been got slapped, got stuck was trapped in the mire and started drowning, but the her friend saved her him. After the friend recovered recovering from her ordeal, the near drowning, on a slab of stone, she wrote on a stone: etched the following words, "TODAY MY BEST FRIEND SAVED MY LIFE!"
The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him, "After I hurt you, you wrote in the sand and now, you write on a stone, why? "
"When I slapped you, you wrote your grieving in sand while today, you etched it in stone?"
I am changing the generality of the answer into a specific one. This is because the way you wrote is like a lecture from the one who was slapped in the face. So it is not a very warm hearted way of saying things.
The other friend replied: "When someone a friend hurts me, us, we should I write it down in the sand where so that the winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But, when someone does something good for us, for a good deed done, we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase it easily." [No spacing after a quote. Given enough time, the wind can erode all traces!]
My friend hurt me yesterday. It was wormwood to me. I can't cannot get it out of my mind. If there were is a beach here, I would write my hard feelings on the sand down. But However, there is a beautiful park near my office and there is my habitual bench under the a chestnut tree, is my favourite bench. I'm am going there now.
LEARN TO WRITE YOUR HURTS WHATEVER IS HURTING YOU IN THE SAND, AND TO BUT CARVE YOUR BENEFITS JOY IN STONE.
A great tale of morality. You have beautiful thoughts.
Hard feeling
A story tells that two friends were walking through the desert. During some point of the journey they had an argument, and one friend slapped the other one in the face. The one who got slapped was hurt, but without saying anything, wrote in the sand: "TODAY MY BEST FRIEND SLAPPED ME IN THE FACE. "
They kept on walking until they found an oasis, where they decided to take a bath. The one, who had been slapped, got stuck in the mire and started drowning, but the friend saved him. After the friend recovered from the near drowning, he wrote on a stone: "TODAY MY BEST FRIEND SAVED MY LIFE. "
The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him, "After I hurt you, you wrote in the sand and now, you write on a stone, why? "
The other friend replied: "When someone hurts us, we should write it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But, when someone does something good for us, we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase it. "
My friend hurt me yesterday. It was wormwood to me. I can't get it out of my mind. If there were a beach here I would write my hard feelings down. But there is a beautiful park near my office. And there is my habutual bench under the chest-tree, I'm going there now.
LEARN TO WRITE YOUR HURTS IN THE SAND, AND TO CARVE YOUR BENEFITS IN STONE
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