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Planning activies Many people don’t like to plan every detail of their lives. But in fact, planning is a good way to save time. The most of people have never organized their things to do, so it causes that they don´t have enough time to do everything and this produce much stress in them. If they planned all their dialy activities them would be easier to do, because they don´t would spend time in unnecessary things, so the time would be utilized correctly. Planning activities is an excellent tool to organized our days and don´t to be stressed. Thanks for the corrections (:

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Planning Activies

Many people don’t like to plan every detail of their lives. But in fact, planning is a good way to save both time and stress.

 

The Most of people have never organized their things to do. , so it causes that they don´t have enough time to do everything and This can produce much stress in them. because they they never feel they have enough time to do everything they want.

 

If they planned all their dialy activities them it would be easier for them to do, because they don´t wouldn't spend time in  on unnecessary things. so the time would be utilized correctly.

 

Planning activities is an excellent tool to organized  organize  our days and don´t not to be so stressed.

Thanks for the corrections (:

 

Alda, I tried to correct your note by keeping most of your vocabulary intact. I understood exactly what you were saying. I hope others can give you suggestions. 

Bien hecho! 

 

 

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Planning activies

Many people don’t like to plan every detail of their lives. But in fact, planning is a good way to save time. The most of people have never organized their things to do, so it causes that they don´t have enough time to do everything and this produce much stress in them. If they planned all their dialy activities them would be easier to do, because they don´t would spend time in unnecessary things, so the time would be utilized correctly. Planning activities is an excellent tool to organized our days and don´t to be stressed.

Thanks for the corrections (:

 

Many people don't like to plan every detail of their lives. However, planning is a good way to save time.  Most people have never organized their things to do, so they don't have enough time to do everything.  This causes much stress in them.  If they planned their daily activities it would much easier, since they wouldn't spend time on unnecessary things and time would be utilized correctly.  Planning activities is an excellent tool to organize our days and to relieve stress.

things to do : many times we just say 'your schedule'   Alda, bien hecho...

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I never plan any thing, I think planning makes me nerves and gives me stress,I hate routine,by the way it seems world works by plan!
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I want to say something but I'm not sure it's grammatically right or not. my English is not good. ;)(please correct it if it's necessary) you are right. planning is the key to success and to my mind, if someone has a dream and always does his best to achieve it his life will be organized automatically.
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well done :)

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