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Hospital
Yesterday I went to the Eye hospital because I my eyes felt uncomfortable about my eyes which as I always wear glasses. In the hospital there were many patients, some of which were are waiting for to registering, some were waiting for a doctor.
As soon as I arrived there, I registered. It was not expensive to for register. After have done register having registered, it took a while for my turn was hardly to come to me. About one an hour later, I heard someone calling my name. So I followed her toward to the consulting consultation room. In the room the doctor checked my eyes in various ways.
Then he told me that there are small spots in my eyes but they are not serious about it. He told me that if I used medicine, it would disappear soon. He guided directed me to go to the royal physician for more except checking expert checks.
In the waiting room, I had to wait nearly 2 hours to see the physician. He also checked my eyes carefully and gave me a list of medicine to buy. So I went to the medicine center (pharmacy?) and bought the medicine. Now I am using the medicine for my eyes. I hope my eyes will recover.
The bits in yellow are corrections.
The bits in blue are suggestions to make the sentence sound better.
"the medicine center" - Is this just where you buy medicine?
A common name for that could be "pharmacy" or maybe "drug store".
I hope the medicine works for you!
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