MY TERRIBLE HOLIDAY
We have 7 days for National Day.I thought that have seveal days to climb mountains but I have too many homework.Everyday,i am busy with my homework,so i have no time go out.I miss my old life!
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i hate when that happened ;(
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MY TERRIBLE HOLIDAY
We have seven days for National Day. I thought that we would have seveal days to climb mountains, but I have too mush homework. Everyday, I am busy with my homework, so I have no time go out. (This is correct, but we would probably say "I don't have time to go out.) I miss my old life!
You must leave space after punctuation. Also, important nouns should be capitalized. If you write or type a number under ten, you must spell it out in letters. I am not sure what National Day is; that may or may no be correct.
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