When I feel lonely
Everyone could feel lonely sometimes and not except me. When I feel lonely, I prefer reading or thinking to complainning . Last Month,I lost my fravorite love.Beginning, I was't calm and eat hardly.But now I feel good, I believe everything we experienced can let us grow up.
My English is a litter poor , Do you know what I mean?
Hope you give me a amend.
Thanks very much !
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When I feel lonely
Everyone can feel lonely sometimes and I am no exception. When I feel lonely, I prefer reading or think of ways to complain. Last month, I lost my beloved. At the beginning, I wasn't able to stay calm and could hardly eat. But now I feel good. I believe what we experience enables us to grow up.My English is a little poor. Do you understand what I am trying to say?
Hope you can help me amend it.
Thank you very much!
明白你想说什么，基本上可以理解。好好学习吧，相信你会进步得很快
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