review about The Forth Kind: May 23, 2010

I have to present the review in English.
So I prepared some pictures. And I wrote the review in the form of conversation.
I know this is too long and there are a lot of wrong expressions.
I want your help. Thank you for your attention.
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Maybe you are interested in UFO'S? Do you believe in the existence of aliens?
Actually, I like to watch thrillers and “The Forth Kind” is one of them.
Have you seen the movie? It’s very interesting if you enjoy tension. The director has claimed that it's based on a true story. There are a lot of real dates such as interviews, recorded screens and recorded voice. This movie begins with an interview of Dr. Tyler. She was a mental doctor but she looks so tired and mad because she went through difficulties. Her experience, is in the story of this movie. What is it makes her?(What does this mean?) What was happened to her?
Dr. Tyler worked for patients who are suffer mentally. She mainly puts them to sleep, and then talks to them. We can call it hypnosis. (As you see, this is real recorded picture and another is adapted for the movie) One day she found out what all the patients had in common. In hypnotic state, patients insist that they can’t sleep because a white owl is watching them everywhere, and anytime, but after they wake up from hypnosis ,they can't explain anything else about that.
She hypnotized Tommy who underwent a strange situation and asked questions in more detail.
She asked “Did you see the owl?” Then Tommy said “I don’t remember. Eh? There was an owl. Something is outside the door. They are opening the door. Oh my god.” He was really scared and even twisted his body around when he was screaming. Eventually he committed  suicide with a gun.
She often made a video diary. One day, she was shocked because there was a very strange voice recorded, along with her own voice. It was happening to her as well, and all the events occured happened at 3:30 am.
According to technical term, there are four kinds of alien encounters. When a UFO is sighted, it is called an encounter of the first kind. When evidence is collected, it is known as an encounter of the second kind. When contact is made with aliens, it is the third kind. The next level, abduction, is the fourth kind.
Dr. Tyler discovers that the reason people have these strange symptoms, is by the aliens. She finally hypnotizes herself. As a result of that, she became like this as well.
This movie makes you believe it's real, by showing real and fake scenes, and strange sounds the patients make that you enough to make your blood freeze. Be careful at 3:30 am,  it might happen to you. Actually I experienced a similar case. I saw this movie in my room. Everything was perfect because nobody else was home and I turned off all the lights at midnight except  for my computer monitor. At the end of the movie, my bedroom door suddenly opened and someone was standing there. Of course, I was really shocked and then I shouted out. The person who opened my door was my brother. He was also surprised with my scream.
I recommend that you watch it alone, night without any lights and with the volume up.
Enjoy it without suspecting it's a fake movie..


(Using the words "'and' and 'but' at the beginning of a sentence is considered "incorrect English" even though It IS commonly used. It's okay to do this sometimes but not a lot, which you seem to have a habit of doing. Also, you constructed a lot of "run-on sentences, and stopped or started a sentence where you shouldn't have. You should work on this, other than that this was pretty good =])