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My strengths and weaknesses
I think the my greatest strength of myself is that I am a very persistent person and my life is very regular normal. For example, I went to play table-tennis with my friend every Wednesday afternoon and Saturday afternoon. and I spend one hour learning English in the morning at about 7 am. before I go to the lab. I have stuck to this schedule since I became a graduate student. Of course somethimes there are some exceptions. For example, sometimes when I go home, I have to communicate with my parents and am left with little time left to study. and I also listen to English tapes before I going to sleep, so consequently, it is a little difficult for me to sleep without listening to English.
And I am very healthy, both physically and metal mentally, I hardly go to the hopital. Maybe this is attributed to my regular life.
To the As for my weakness, I think my greatest weakness is that I am not a very imaginable imaginative person, I have few with a little of innovation innovative and aesthetics skills.At Being in my twenties, I didn't don't like to make up myself and to be honest, I don't have the ability to make up, it's a little difficult for me.
* You can not start a sentence with and
* Always capitalize the first word of a new sentence
* Proper nouns (i.e. days of the weeks, languages) are capitalized
* I don't really get what you mean by "I didn't like to make up myself" so I couldn't really correct that part
Overall, it's a really good composition. Your English is really good and the subject matter is interesting. Being persistent is definitely a very good skill to have.
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