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my strengths and weaknesses I think the greatest streagth of myself is that I am a very peresistant person. and my life is very regular. for example I went to play table-tennis with my friend every wednesday afternoon and saturday afternoon. and I spent one hour learning english in the morning about 7 am. before I go to lab. I stick to this schedule since I become a graduate student. of course somethimes there are some exceptions, for example I go home, I have to communicate with my parents with little time left to study. and I also listen to english before I going to sleep, so consequently, It is a little difficult for me to sleep without listening to English. And I am very healthy, both physical and metal, I hardly go to hopital,maybe this is attributed to my regular life. To the weakness, I think my greatest weakness is that, I am not a very imaginable person, with a little of innovation and aesthetics.At my twenties, I didn't like to make up myself and to be honest,I donn't have the ability to make up, It's a little difficult for me.

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My strengths and weaknesses



I think the my greatest strength of myself is that I am a very persistent person and my life is very regular normal. For example, I went to play table-tennis with my friend every Wednesday afternoon and Saturday afternoon. and I spend one hour learning English in the morning at about 7 am. before I go to the lab. I have stuck to this schedule since I became a graduate student. Of course somethimes there are some exceptions. For example, sometimes when I go home, I have to communicate with my parents and am left with little time left to study. and I also listen to English tapes before I going to sleep, so consequently, it is a little difficult for me to sleep without listening to English.

And I am very healthy, both physically and metal mentally, I hardly go to the hopital. Maybe this is attributed to my regular life.

To the As for my weakness, I think my greatest weakness is that I am not a very imaginable imaginative person, I have few with a little of innovation innovative and aesthetics skills.At Being in my twenties, I didn't don't like to make up myself and to be honest, I don't have the ability to make up, it's a little difficult for me.

 

* You can not start a sentence with and

* Always capitalize the first word of a new sentence

* Proper nouns (i.e. days of the weeks, languages) are capitalized

* I don't really get what you mean by "I didn't like to make up myself" so I couldn't really correct that part

 

Overall, it's a really good composition. Your English is really good and the subject matter is interesting. Being persistent is definitely a very good skill to have.

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