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Projects Hi, How can I improve the next paragraph? Thanks! "I contributed to better assessing of the implemented projects through the analysis of the following criteria: relevance, effectiveness, efficiency, impact, feasibility, consistency and participation. Identifies strengths and weaknesses of the implemented projects has been done as well"

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Hi,

How can I improve the next paragraph? Thanks!

"I contributed to better assessing of the implemented projects through the analysis of the following criteria: relevance, effectiveness, efficiency, impact, feasibility, consistency and participation. Identifies strengths and weaknesses of the implemented projects has been done as well"

 

It's a bit complicated and ambigious what you are trying to say but here's my best guess as a native speaker.

 

I analyzed the implemented projects and assesed them for areas of improvement.  The analysis consised of the following criteria: relevance, effectiveness, efficiency, impact, feasibility, consistency and participation.  As part of this analysis, I also identified the strengths and weaknesses of the projects.  

 

 

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