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When you think about what the things you can't renounce from your life are, you might have strong great difficulties individualizing to individuate them... there They are in fact: family, friends, job work, and health.... Maybe it could It might be possible to form a classification, but surely it couldn't (wouldn't) be feasible to exclude one or another. Maybe often In life, you often have to choose which what your priorities are, but you should never forget to improve every sector aspect (or facet) of your life.
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Hi Elena,
I had a few corrections and suggestions that I wanted to expand on.
1) Your first phrase is, I believe, technically correct. However, it might be improved upon if you wrote it as "When you think about the things that you can't renounce from your life".
2) We usually say "great difficulty/difficulties" instead of "strong".
3) I believe it would be better to use "wouldn't be feasible" instead of "couldn't".
4) "Sector" typically refers to a division of a miltiary or the economy.
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