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A new diary - first day For improve my English I've thinked that was a good idea to write a little diary and hope that someone corrects my many wrongs. Well, this is my day of today! This morning I get up at seven o'clock, I had breakfast and then I accompanied my daughter to school. She had her second day of school and she was very happy (strange..!) Then I went to my work in centre of city... It was 9 hours long and when I finished to work I was very tired. At home I saw my wife not very happy because today is ours marriage's riccorence and I forgot to buy a present for her. In really I had no time to buy it and I bought only a little cake in a bar. So, a bit sad, I type here in italki to make a lot of wrongs with my English....

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A My new Diary - The First Day

To improve my English, I've thinked had been thinking [past tense of "think" is "thought"] that it was a good idea to write keep a little diary and hope that someone will corrects my errors/mistakes many wrongs.

Well, this is my day of today!

This morning I get woke up at seven o'clock.  I Had breakfast and then I accompanied my daughter to school. She had It was her second day of school and she was very happy (strange..!)

Then I went to my work in the centre of city... It was I worked for 9 hours long and when I finished to work was done, I was very tired.


When I reached At home, I saw my was wife not very happy because today is ours wedding anniversary. marriage's riccorence and I had forgotten to buy get her a present for her. In really reality, I had no time to buy it get her a gift. and I only bought only a little cake in the store a bar.


So, with a bit of sadness, I am type here in at italki to make a lot of wrongs typing with my many errors in English....

 

Keeping a diary is great.  Not only it records your daily life but also to improve the language you are writing in.  I kept diaries since I was twelve and is still continuing, although now it is in electronic form.  I miss writing on table, although correction, search is such a breeze.

 

Not mean to cause rift, I always tell my beloved that coming home safely everyday is the most wonderful gift I received!  So each day, I have the most wonderful gift in the world!

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A new diary - first day

To improve my English I've thinked that was a good idea to write a little diary and hope that someone corrects my many wrongs.

Well, this is my day of today!

This morning I get up at seven o'clock, I had breakfast and then I accompanied my daughter to school. She had her second day of school and she was very happy (strange..!)
Then I went to my work in centre of city... It was 9 hours long and when I finished to work I was very tired.
At home I saw my wife not very happy because today is ours marriage's riccorence and I forgot to buy a present for her. In really I had no time to buy it and I bought only a little cake in a bar.
So, a bit sad, I type here in italki to make a lot of wrongs with my English....

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