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My first interview I'm looking for a job recently and I had the first interview today. When I got a call which notified me that they wanted to talk with me, I was so happy. I've sent many resumes to different companies since June but I didn't get any news from them. Therefore, I was really happy when I knew that they wanted to interview me. However, after I finish the interview, I felt a little weird. I was thinking: is the job my favorite? Do I really wanna do the job? Because I thought the job was different from the job I image. I do know that there is no a job is perfect and I also know that I'm not a child and I can't dream anymore. I need a job. I need to earn money. So, maybe I will take the job if they want me to be their employee. When I was in the train that I took after interview, I felt the heavy of reality....

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My first interview

I'mve been looking for a job recently (these days) and today I had the first interview. When I got a call which notified me that they wanted to talk with to me, I was so happy. Since June I've sent many resumes to different companies, but I didn't get any news from (any of) them. Therefore, I was really happy when I knew heard that they wanted to interview me.

However, after I finished the interview, I felt a little weird. I was thinking: is this the job my favorite I want? Do I really wanna do the this job? Because I thought (to my self), the job was different from the job one I imagined. I do know that there is no a perfect job, is and I also know that I'm not a child, and I can't dream anymore. I need a job. I need to earn money. So, maybe I will take the job, if they want me to be their employee.

When I was ion the a train that I took after the interview, I felt the heavy weight of reality....

 

It's not bad, I think the main problem is that word 'job' is in very nearly every sentence, sometimes even more than once. You can use work, occupation, it, gig even.

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