First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello~~ ((Excellent use of the ~, the name escapes me at the moment. But by using the ~ you are simply dragging out the hello to "HELLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO". I'm not sure if this was your intention or not, but it is used correctly :)))
my name is menglin zhang ((In English we always captalize names of people, cities, countries, business names, the letter I, etc... (ask me if you want a better explination!). Your name should be captalized as follows: Menglin Zhang)) . . i ((When "I" is used in a sentence it is ALWAYS captalized))  am an outgoing girl who likes to make friends with people all over the world. ^。^
i  like singing , sometimes drawing comics...and i like learning english ((When talking about another language you should always captalize it. So in this case English should be captalized. )) as well. i hope i can get to know some native english speaker so that i can improve my spoken english . and aslo im ((This is a toughy. You have to use an apostraphe in this case. "i'm)) always willing to help people study chinese.. =D

Wow. I am impressed with your writing. It is smooth, and very "native" like. You have  problems with basic captalization (and by basic I am not saying that you're stupid becuase you don't understand the basics, but I am saying is that you understand the hard part of English: making smooth, well structured, coherent sentences). If you can learn when and where to apply captal letters and how to apostrophes then your English writing skills will almost look native!  Thank you. This was a pleasure to read (one of the best entrys I have read on this website to be honest!) 

If you are looking for a language partner let me know, I can help with your spoken English if you'd like? Would you be willing to teach me some Chinese? =D 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello~~
my name is Menglin Zhang. i am a outgoing girl who likes to make friends with people all over the world. ^。^
I like singing, sometimes drawing comics...and i like learning english as well. i hope i can get to know some native english speakers so that i can improve my spoken english. Also, I'm always willing to help people study chinese.. =D