First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning Mandarin sooo here goes...

Wo yao xue PutongHua, yin wei wo xiang xue zai Zhong Guo.

Wo shi zhong guo ren tan shi wo de ying wen bu hao. Wo cong zai Feilvpin lai.

Wo xi wan ding Kpop!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Wo yao xue PutongHua, yin wei wo xiang xue zai Zhong Guo.

Wo shi zhong guo ren tan shi wo de ying wen bu hao. Wo cong zai Feilvpin lai.

Wo xi wan ding Kpop!

我要学普通话，因为我想学在中国（这里应该是: 因为我想在中国学习）

我是中国人，但是我的英文不好。我从在菲律宾来。[这里应该是 : 我是中国人，但是我中文不好，我来自菲律宾(你是中国人，你在菲律宾长大)]

我洗完定KPOP（我喜欢听KPOP）

I want learn Chinese, because  I want study in China.

I am Chinese people,but I Chinese is poor .I come from Philippines (you are Chinese,you grew up in Philippines).

I like listening to KPOP.

我不知道我说的你能否理解，因为我的英语不好，希望我们能够成为好朋友。

I don't know can or can't understand of me ,because I English is poor ,I hope we will become good friends.