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Small Flower A tiny little flower rose in the autumn. Then the winter have come. The flower died. A tiny little flower rose in the autumn. Then the winter have come. Why that flower still alive? (Suggestions and corrections please).

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A Small Flower

 

If you are trying to write a poem, you must begin a new sentence on each new line.  I am assuming that it is a poem because the styles suggests one.

 

 

A tiny little flower rose grew in the autumn.

Then the winter have came.

The flower died.

A tiny little flower rose grew in the autumn.

Then the winter have came.

Why is that flower still alive?

(Suggestions and corrections please).

 

I would use the word "wee" instead of "tiny" if this is a poem.

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