Small Flower
A tiny little flower rose in the autumn. Then the winter have come. The flower died.
A tiny little flower rose in the autumn. Then the winter have come. Why that flower still alive?
(Suggestions and corrections please).
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A Small Flower
If you are trying to write a poem, you must begin a new sentence on each new line. I am assuming that it is a poem because the styles suggests one.
A tiny little flower rose grew in the autumn.
Then the winter have came.
The flower died.
A tiny little flower rose grew in the autumn.
Then the winter have came.
Why is that flower still alive?
(Suggestions and corrections please).
I would use the word "wee" instead of "tiny" if this is a poem.
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