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My Summer Vacation This summer, I went to a trip with a few friends of mine. Our first destination is HangZhou. The wind was roaring when we arrived at the XiaoShan airport. For the first time to leave home so far without parents, All of us were so happy. The weather of HangZhou changed a lot. But the bad weather couldn't let us down. After supper, we visited the West Lake which is one of the most famous lakes in China . Once If you come to HangZhou, you should rent a bike and go riding aroud the lake. One side of the lake was so crowded. But when we walked to SuDi, we were addicted in the beauty of the West Lake. The water in the lake shaked by the wind. We feel so cool and comfortable. The West Lake is famous because of it's deeply culture.Here buried a lot of famous people in the history.The west Lake is so beautiful,like hundreds years ago,a great poet of China admired it: 欲把西湖比西子,淡妆浓抹总相宜.

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My Summer Vacation

This summer, I went to a trip with a few friends of mine. Our first destination iswas HangZhou. The wind was roaring when we arrived at the XiaoShan airport. For the first time to leave home so far without parents, All of us were so happy. The weather of HangZhou changed a lot, but the bad weather couldn't lget us down.
After supper, we visited the West Lake which is one of the most famous lakes in China . Once If you come to HangZhou, you should rent a bike and go riding aroud the lake. One side of the lake was so crowded,  but when we walked to SuDi, we were addicted in to the beauty of the West Lake. The water in the lake shakedrippled bywith the wind. We feel felt so cool and comfortable.
The West Lake is famous because of it's deeplyrich culture. Buried here are a lot of famous people in the throughout history. The west Lake is so beautiful, that a hundreds years ago, a great poet of China admired it: 欲把西湖比西子,淡妆浓抹总相宜.

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