First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am Yeung Ching Yi,comes from Hong Kong. I am now is a secondary school's student. My native languages are Traditional Chinese,Putonghua and Yangzhouhua. I love drawing, sleeping and listening to music or something enjoyable.I noticed that my English level is too low,may be I fail the exam on the HKDSE.I hope my English will be improved and I pass it.

I am Yeung Ching Yi,_comes from Hong Kong._I am now is a secondary school'sstudent._My native languages are Traditional Chinese,Putonghua Mandarin and_the Yangzhouhua dialect._I love drawing,_sleeping and listening to music or something enjoyable --> perhaps: doing things that make me happy._I noticed that my English level is very poor  too low, and I may be fail the HKDSE exam on the HKDSE._I hope that my English will beimproved enough by then and pass it.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

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I am Yeung Ching Yi,_comes from Hong Kong.__I am now is a secondary school's student.__My native languages are Traditional Chinese,Putonghua Mandarin and the Yangzhouhua dialect.__I love drawing,_sleeping and listen to music or something enjoyable.__I noticed that my English level is very poor  too low, and I may be fail the HKDSE exam on the HKDSE.I hope that my English will be improved enough by then and pass it.

Can you speak Cantonese?  I am surprise if you cannot.  How are you going to survive there?  At the same time, you have to work extremely hard with your English.  At your current level, you will not be able to pass the exam. This is because you don't even know the basic mechanics of the language.  At least there are enough English speakers in HK to help you in your daily English.