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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English,because English is most widespread language in the world, I want to make friends from all over the world. My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in China. I am crazy in travelling!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because English is the most widespread language in the world. I want to make friends from all over the world.
My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China.
I am crazy very interested in travelling!

 

What places have you been to?  I travel around the world also.

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Original text  原文:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because English is most widespread language in the world, I want to make friends from all over the world.
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in China.
I am crazy in travelling!

Very good job :)  很好

Corrected text  正确的文本:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself ( Introduction, Introducing myself )

I am learning English because English it is the most widespread commonly used language in the world.  I want to make friends who are from all over the world. 
I grew up in China, so my native language is Chinese.
I am crazy about in travelling!

Alternative examples 另一种例子:

I love traveling

I absolutely love traveling

My favorite hobby is traveling.  I love it.

English is spoken all over the world.  It is the international language.

The use of english is "wide spread".

I study english because it is ubiquitous ( ubiquitous = omnipresent )

I hope to meet friends from many places throughout the world.

 

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You can use the word "crazy", if it is used as vernacular or common spoken english (口语). If you do use it, you should say "crazy about", not "crazy in".
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because English is the most widespread language in the world, I want to make friends from all over the world.
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in China.
I am interested in travelling!I want to go to Thailand next holiday.

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