First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English at the moment because it is an international and important language.And I think it is really cool if I can speak frulent English.
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Shanghai,China.
I enjoy reading alone and listening to the music.I love the blue sky and stars at night.I love enjoying every beautiful thing in life.
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hello
My name is jessica i saw your profile today at(italki.com)and became interested in you i will also like to know you the more and i want you to send a mail to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom l am.Here is my email address([email protected]).I believe we can move from here.I am waiting for your mail to my email address above.jessica.(Remember the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life)
Please reply me with my email address here
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In my correction, it didn't highlight the spaces after the periods, sorry.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English at the moment because it is an international and important language.And I think it is really cool if I can speak frulent English.
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Shanghai,China.
I enjoy reading alone and listening to the music.I love the blue sky and stars at night.I love enjoying every beautiful thing in life.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English at the moment because it is an international and important language.I think it would be really cool if I could speak fluent English someday.
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Shanghai,China.
I enjoy reading alone and listening tomusic.I love the blue sky and the stars at night.I love enjoying every beautiful thing in life.
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Explainations:
First correction: a space should follow all commas, periods, question marks, exclamination marks, colons, and semi-colons (.,?!:;).
Second, third, and fourth corrections: The tenses were a bit weird, I just fixed it by matching all the tenses.
Fifth and sixth corrections: same as the first correct
Seventh correction: you can leave out "the" in certain cases, and it kind of works here, but I as I talked, I would use the word "the". Example: Rabbit is purple. Rabbits are white. The rabbits are white. The rabbit is purple.
Eighth correction: same as the first, fifth, and sixth corrections.
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