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the fate of celebrity. While taking a walk , i caught up with this thought. I think it seems like god gives them the talent even before they was born or how dare could people like Beethoven make those mellifluous songs and Einstein changes the paradigm of science. I don't emagine those great works if god would'n want to give them.

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천만에요. 만약 넌 질문이 있으면, 내게 물어봐 주세요.
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The fate of celebrity.

While taking a walk , I got caught up in this thought.

It seems like God gives certain people talent even before they were born .

If not, how could people like Beethoven make those mellifluous songs and

how could Einstein changes the paradigm of science.

I don't emagine those great works would have ever happened if God didn't play a part.

~  A kindler, gentler correction.  ^^ 
~만약 넌 질문이 있으면, 내게 물어봐 주세요. ~ 낸시

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thank you for your sincerity.
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The fate of celebrities.  

While taking a walk , I was caught up with this thought.

I think it seems like God gives them celebrities the talent even before they was are born.  

or Otherwise, how dare could people like Beethoven make those mellifluous [Not a common word; good if you are talking to professionals, maybe a little too much if you are talking with friends.  Just my opinion.  I'd try "magnificent", or other similar words.] songs and Einstein change the paradigms of science?

I don't imagine those great works would exist if God would'n didn't want to give them their talents.

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