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Things happen today I arrive in the morning in my office. And i clean my office. After that i was ready to receive visitors. At 10;30 am i went to the bank to some money for student whose have training , i give them the money for transport. 1:30 pm i go to the lunch. And now i writing my notebook entry. Please correct me where i make some mistake

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The Things That Happened Today

First of all, I arrived at my office in the this morning . and i cleaned it my office. 

After that, I was ready to receive visitors.
At 10:30 am I went to the bank to withdraw (deposit?) some money for a student whose have is receiving training, and gave them the money for transport.

The money means all of the money. Is that what you meant? 
At 1:30 pm I went to the lunch, and now I am writing my notebook entry.

I removed am/pm, because it's already clear from the context.
Please correct me where I have made any mistakes. 

 

I hope this is helpful. I only corrected the basic grammar and style.

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Happenings Today

This Morning I arrived at my office and cleaned my office room. 
After that i was ready open and accept clients.

Around 10:30 am i went to the bank to get some money for a student who have training. I gave them money for transportation.

at 1:30 pm I went to lunch. And now i am writing my notebook entry. 



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thanx a lot for correct me. I feel i can emprove more
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Things That Happen Today

 

Today, I arrived this morning at work and ended up cleaning my office. Afterwards, I was pretty much ready to receive visitors. At 10:30AM, I went to the bank to deposit some money for student whose going through training. I gave the student money for transportation. When 1:30PM came around, I ended up going to lunch. Of course, right now I am writing an entry in my notebook.

 

Please correct me where I made some mistakes.

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