Corrections · 5
The Things That Happened Today
First of all, I arrived at my office in the this morning . and i cleaned it my office.
After that, I was ready to receive visitors.
At 10:30 am I went to the bank to withdraw (deposit?) some money for a student whose have is receiving training, and gave them the money for transport.
The money means all of the money. Is that what you meant?
At 1:30 pm I went to the lunch, and now I am writing my notebook entry.
I removed am/pm, because it's already clear from the context.
Please correct me where I have made any mistakes.
I hope this is helpful. I only corrected the basic grammar and style.
Happenings Today
This Morning I arrived at my office and cleaned my office room.
After that i was ready open and accept clients.
Around 10:30 am i went to the bank to get some money for a student who have training. I gave them money for transportation.
at 1:30 pm I went to lunch. And now i am writing my notebook entry.
Things That Happen Today
Today, I arrived this morning at work and ended up cleaning my office. Afterwards, I was pretty much ready to receive visitors. At 10:30AM, I went to the bank to deposit some money for student whose going through training. I gave the student money for transportation. When 1:30PM came around, I ended up going to lunch. Of course, right now I am writing an entry in my notebook.
Please correct me where I made some mistakes.
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