about river

It's too hot in my city! All my friends spend all their weekends on the river shore. I envied them too much, because it was impossible for me to go out the city. Even on weekends. My work doesn't let me have a rest often. But yesterday i went to the country with my friends! It was the best day of this summer! We spent the all day on the river shore. We fished at fist, than swam, played football and had sunbathe! It was wonderful.
And now, when I'm sitting in a small stuffy office, only my memories about "The Riiver day'" give me power to work!

Corrections: It's too hot in my city! All my friends spend every weekend on the river shore and I envy them because it's impossible for me to get out of the city; not even on the weekends. My work doesn't allow me to rest often but I got to go out to the country with my friends yesterday! It was the best day of this summer. We spent all day on the river shore. We fished at first then swam, played football, and sunbathed. It was wonderful. And now when I'm sitting in my small stuffy office, only memories about "The River Day" gives me power to work.

April, your English and writing is very good. To be able to write a short story in less than 10 sentences and have the reader feel a little of your adventure is very good. I really felt that you enjoyed your little adventure. Keep it up!

About River

It's way too hot in the city. All of my friends' spend their week-ends on the river shore. I envy them so much, because it's impossible for me to go out by the city on the week-ends. My work doesn't allow me to rest that much. Yesterday, I went to the country with my friends and felt that it was the best day of the entire Summer. We spent all day down at the river shore doing different things such as fishing, swimming, playing football, and then sunbathe. It was truly wonderful. However, I am back sitting in a small and stuffy office so my only memories are about the day down at the river shore. This gives me the power to work.