What changes do you think the new century will bring?
The history proved that the society is always developing time by time, and both the scientific and the material improved. In the past century, people try hard at many aspects, and in the new century, as far as I am concerned, there are at least three aspects will change: the traffic will become more convenience, the education will more concern on art and humanity, and the economics will get rid of depression.
Firstly, in the 21 century, the traffic will become more convenience and people will travel more efficiency. These conveniences derived from two factors. One is that the vehicle will be more developed, such as the private cars will available to all the families instead of the bicycles, and this changes short people’s time which they had wasted on the road before. The other is that the traffic system will become more efficient, for the reason that more viaducts will be build to release the traffic jam.
Secondly, education will more concern on art and humanity in the new century. In the past, the science and technology paid more attention by our state. The science subjects are treated more important as they are considered link to the society’s development more directly. But as our society developing, people began to realize that the art and humanity values the equal importance.
Last but not the least, in the new century, we can believe optimistic that the economics will get rid of depression. The economics will growth and it will also improve people’s life. It is reasonable to say so because of the development of the productivity in the 21 century.
In summary, there are mainly three changes respectively on the traffic, the education, and the economics will change, and these changes will surely improve people’s lives and people will enjoy themselves more convenient, more efficient, and more happiness lives in the 21 century.
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What changes do you think the new century will bring?
Firstly, (Better: First of all,) in the 21st century,
Secondly, education will be more concerned with
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In summary, there are
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wow, great piece your English is very good...well done...I can only see a few very simple changes to make...well done...
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I missed a sentence:
and this changes short people’s time which they had wasted on the road before.
and these changes decrease the amount of time people wasted on the road before.
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