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Making a loooong sentence Recently, I read a Susan Sontag’s book, “Regarding the Pain of Others” which argues that a shock - tremendous but obviously transient- over terrifying images of the countries which are underdeveloped or in a state of civil war, being broadcasted through media every day and the resulting pity about the pain of peoples in there, is just the reflection of your thought and some kind of relief that it has nothing to do with you, taking place somewhere far away from you. If there is something wrong here, please fix it for me! Cheers :)

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Making a loooong sentence

Recently, I read a Susan Sontag’s book, “Regarding the Pain of Others”.  In it, she argues that a shock - tremendous, but obviously transient- over terrifying images of the countries which are underdeveloped or in a state of civil war, being broadcasted through media every day and the resulting pity about the pain of peoples in there, is just the reflection of your thought and some kind of relief that it has nothing to do with you, taking place somewhere far away from you.

If there is something wrong here, please fix it for me!
Cheers :)

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