Nothing Work

Sometimes, I sit alone, talking with my self MYSELF, thinking of this world, and try TRYING to find out some solutions for my problem....then I reached REACH to a closed door. I said SAY to myself maybe these problems will lead me to others OTHER paths, or maybe I just lost my way. Otherwise, I see many people close to me but they do not try even to understand me. I am sure when you read these lines, you WILL wonder what's my problem. It's very complicated and even I can't understand it.

Notes:

-By using the word 'sometimes', you are showing that the actions in your journal are supposedly to be habitual and in the present. 

-Try to keep sentences parallel, using similar structure and word choice. For example, say "I like to walk, eat and run" or "I like walking, eating, and running" but not "I like to walk, eating, and run".

-Likewise, be aware of the verb tense (time period - past, present, or future) that you are using. For example, say "when I sleep, I dream" or "when I slept, I dreamt" but not "When I sleep, I dreamt".

-For the part otherwise, it is unclear why you used that word.

-For the part what's my problem, you should either write "What's his problem?" or what my problem is. It is not a huge mistake but it is noticeable in writing.

Good work. It's good to wonder about your path in life - don't despair. Have hope and enjoy the journey of life as it comes. I think you are right that your problems can lead you to other paths and they may even take you to wonderful places you've never dreamed of ;)