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Change One Important Thing in My Hometown If I could change one important thing in my hometown, I'd like to build a school for the children live around because some children in my hometown come from poor families. And I think education and happy childhood are both important things for kids. Firstly, my hometown is just a small county and people live there are mostly not so rich. So some poor families have no ability to offer their children's expense and that cause those kids lose an opportunity to learn and gain their knowledge. For example, a poor family just exist right beside my home. My neighbor didn't spend much time in school since he was a child, because he had to help his parent working and he couldn't have the same education as other children in the same age. Therefore, I want to build my own school to help those poor children and help them get the same chance to learn. Second, education plays an important role in everyone's life. It is dispensable to study and learn in a person's life. I hope to build a school with a correct direction of education and not just a place performs like a cram school. By this way, it can help children in my hometown to form complete personalities and find out their own interests. For instance, I went to school every day when I was a child, but I did't know what I learned and why I wen to school. Teachers and parents just told us to study harder and harder. I don't think I got the right education way. Hence, building a school with good education system in my hometown is what I want to do the most. Lastly, a place for children to have their happy and interesting childhood is necessary. Nothing is more important than that children have a wonderful memory about their school time. Take my childhood as an example, my teacher and parents always ignored my feeling. The only way to make them happy was to get a good grade in exams. I feel very bad to lose many chances to have a nice time with my friends in childhood. As a result, I want my school can be the paradise for those children and let them never forget. In conclusion, for reasons to help poor students, to build better education system, and to realize a playing garden for children, I prefer to build a school for children if I could change one important thing in my hometown.

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Changing One Important Thing in My Hometown

If I could change one important thing in my hometown, I'd like to build a school for the children who live here because some children in my hometown come from poor families. And I think an education and a happy childhood are both important things for children.

My hometown is just a small county and people who live there are not very wealthy. So some poor families have no ability to bear their children's expenses and that causes those children to lose an opportunity to learn and gain knowledge. For example, a poor family lives right beside my home. My neighbor didn't spend much time in school since he was a child, in fact he had to help with his parents' work and he couldn't have the same education as other children in the same age. Therefore, I want to build my own school to help those poor children and help them get the same chance to learn.

I believe that education plays an important role in everyone's life. It is essential to study and learn in a person's life. I hope to build a school with a correct direction of education and not just a place that operates like a cram school. By this way, it can help children in my hometown to form complete personalities and find out their own interests. For instance, I went to school every day when I was a child, but I didn't know what I learned and why I went to school. Teachers and parents just told us to study harder and harder. I don't think I got the right kind of education. Hence, building a school with a good education system in my hometown is what I want to do the most.

A place for children to have happy and interesting childhoods is necessary. Nothing is more important than that children have wonderful memories about their school years. Taking my childhood as an example, my teacher and parents always ignored my feelings. The only way to make them happy was to get a good grade in exams. I feel very bad to have lost so many chances to have a nice time with my friends in childhood. As a result, I want my school to be a paradise for children.

In conclusion, the one thing I want to change in my hometown is to build a school for children in order to help poor students, to build a better education system, and to give children a garden of play and happy memories.

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It is a good idea.

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