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My little turtle The weather is so fabulous! and i dont have much thing to do, so im going write my first composition here, but do not know what to wirte, so im writing something weird what just happened today... there you go. (nervous...) My little turtle, Adam, a pretty nice pet, almost bited me when i changed the water for it today, and it has never happned before, it has been very nice to me all the time, when it turned its head and opened its super big mouth, i was shocked! it reminded me of the dinosaur or the snake or something else horrible.( lol...) and i droped it into the water immediately, over. After that, I kept thiking about why would it happened, is it becoming fickle in such hot weather? is it hating me,because of i have been very busy lately and have not spent too much time with it? was it hungry? (no way that would happen to it, i feed it very day! but one of my roomate told me i should feed it some meat, kidding?) or was i hurting it? (no way...) Poor me... im kind of scared of Adam now... and i still do not know why was happened to a such great turtle, it was so werid... what am i supposed to do with it?

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My little turtle

The weather is so fabulous! and I i dont have much things to do, so I'm im going to write my first composition here, but do not know what to write wirte, so I'm im writing something weird that what just happened today... there you go. (nervous...)

My little turtle, Adam, a pretty nice pet, almost bited me when I changed the water for him today, and it has never happned before, he has been very nice to me all the time, when he turned his head and opened his super big mouth, I was shocked! He reminded me of a dinosaur or a snake or something else horrible.( lol...) and I dropped him into the water immediately, over.

After that, I kept thiking about why would it happened. Is he becoming fickle in such hot weather? Is he hating me, because of I have been very busy lately and have not spent too much time with him? Was he hungry? (no way that would happen to him, I feed him every day! But one of my roomate told me I should feed him some meat, kidding?) or was I hurting it? (no way...)

Poor me... I'm kind of scared of Adam now... and I still do not know why this happened to a such great turtle, it was so weird... what am I supposed to do with him?

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really? :D :D thx :D maybe i should write more i think,i dunno.too lazy.lol....thx again :D
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This is great. I wish there was more.

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