First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi all! My name is Max, I'm 23 and I live in Rome, Italy.
I'm a student in the "International comic school of Rome", in the animation section. My intention is to go abroad to work, in France or America, or even in Germany, my English is a basic high school English, and I want to improve it for obvious work purposes.
I'm sorry for the errors!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi all(everyone)! My name is Max, I'm 23 and I live in Rome, Italy.
I'm a student who studies animation at(in) the "International Comic School of Rome." My intention is to work abroad in France, America, or even Germany. I learned my English in high school, and I obviously want to improve it for my occupation.
I'm sorry for the errors!
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Bravo! Delle cose:
In inglese, si usa <<everyone>> invece <<all>>.
Di solito, si scriva in maiuscolo i titoli delle università come <<University of Oklahoma>> or <<International Comic School of Rome>>.
<<My intention>> funziona, ma potresti usare <<I hope to...>> anche.
Ho cambinato l'ultimo frase perché era "awkward" come si dice in inglese. "Awkward" come un utinsile è "awkward." Scomodo forse?
E ho eliminato delle virgole. (Punteggiaturra può essere difficile in inglese, specialmente con virgole.)
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