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New Semester The new semester is approaching,which means that I will be a junior in my college years.I have already made up my mind to apply for graduate studies,I must be more diligent than all my classmates.Up to now,I haven't draw up a specific plan.What worse,I don't know what will go on.Look back the whole summer vacation,nothing meaningful happened.Every day, I just repeated the identical life:watching TV,listening to pop-music,surfing the Internet...I feel it monotonous,so I really want to terminate such a kind of life early.Wish great success in the new semester.

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New Semester

The new semester is approaching, which means that I will be a junior in my college years. I have already made up my mind to apply for graduate studies, so I must be more diligent than all my classmates. Up to now, I haven't draw up a specific plan. What  is worse, I (still) don't know what will go on. Looking back at  the whole summer vacation, nothing meaningful happened. Every day, I just repeated the identical life: watching TV, listening to pop-music, surfing the Internet ... I feel it was monotonous, so I really want to terminate such this kind of life early. Wish me a great success in the new semester.

Hey Mandy, pretty good english,  just make sure to put spaces after any of , . :

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