Review: Bruce Almighty
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Review: Bruce Almighty
This is the film for someone who really wants to find out the most important thing in his/her life.
Life is sometime so cruel that the one could be desperate when bad things happen one by one.
Bruce was a reporter in a famous TV broadcast company and he is always hilarious and so humorous to make everybody happy around him. He has a dream to be a representative news anchor. But he lose his luck to be the one whom he is looking forward to being all the time, and what's worse, he's kicked out from the company because he's lost his control and messed it up during a live reporting. Moreover, he gets on his lover's nerves and lose her, too. There's nothing to do except for blaming God about things he's experienced. One day, he gets the message from God and takes God's almighty. Now he can do everything he wants but there's the one thing he cannot think about: The god should be for everyone. He keeps using his power only for himself and the world is getting worse and become chaos. Even though he has almighty, he cannot handle people's freewill like true love. Looking back from now, he starts to realise what is his fault He tries fixing everything he's done before by himself. When he returns his power back to God, he gets to know what the life should be.
You can feel the precious emotion you might miss while you're laughing to Jim Carrey's excellent comedy action. Don't miss it.
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Review: Bruce Almighty
I'll appreciate that someone corrects the review below.
Review: Bruce Almighty
This is the a film for someone who really wants to find out the most important thing in his/her life. Life is sometimes so cruel that the one could be desperate when bad things happen one by one. (I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say here..?). Bruce was a reporter in a famous TV broadcast company. and He is was always hilarious and so humorous to make everybody happy and made the people around him happy. He has a dreamt to be of becoming a representative news anchor. But However, he lose lost his luck and the opportunity to become the news anchor.one whom he is looking forward to being all the time, and To make matters worse, what's worse, he's got kicked out from of the company because he's lost his self-control and messed it up during a live reporting. Moreover, he gets got on his lover's nerves and lose lost her, too. There's was nothing for him to do except for blaming blame God about the things he's had experienced.
One day, he gets the a message from God and takes God's Almighty place. Now he's able to do can do everything he wants but there's the one thing he cannot think about he forgets one thing: The God should always be there for everyone. He keeps using his powers only for himself. As a result, the world is getting worse and becomes chaos chaotic. Even though he has is Bruce Almighty, he cannot handle people's freewill, such as like true love. Looking back from now, he starts to realise what is his faults. He tries to fixing everything he's done before by himself. When After he returns his power back to God, he gets to knows what the how life should be.
You can feel the precious emotions you might miss while you're laughing to at Jim Carrey's excellent comedy/action. Don't miss it.
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Overall, you did extremely well. I think the corrections are mostly due to the tense of your review. You started off in past tense but changed things to present tense. If you have any questions about anything, please let me know :).
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우수한 쓰기있는데도, 두번째 너무 긴 글이었어요. 아주 긴 에세이를 위해서 수정하는 게 시간이 없어요. 미안해요. 대부분의 사람은 단 짧은 에세이를 쓸 거예요. 어떤 사람이 이미 그걸 고치했지만
미래에 당신은 이렇게 계속하다면 몇 가지 우수한 수정자들을 잃을 거예요.
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i watched this movie. i'm not head over heels with jim carey but i think he's a good comedian. he's good at what's he's doing.
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