First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey, I'm Scarlett, 28 years old, working and living in Shanghai now.
I can speak Fluent Chinese, but wanna learn English!! You know it so cool!! You can have many many different country friends,change own idea each other.So~~I like English!

Hey, I'm Scarlett, 28 years old, working and living (1) in Shanghai now.
I can speak (2) Fluent Chinese, but (3) wanna learn English!(4)! You know it so cool!! You can have many (5) many different country friends,change own idea each other.So~~I like English!

Hey, I'm Scarlett. I am 28 years old, now living and working in Shanghai. I can speak fluent Chinese, but want to learn English. You know, it's so cool! If you can speak English, you can have friends from many different countries and exchange ideas with them. So, I like English!

1. put more general idea first, more specific later
2. no caps on “fluent”
3. “wanna” is okay for speaking. Careful about such informal language in writing
4. One exclamation point is enough! Use them sparingly
5. non-idiomatic

加油！