Wrong (correct) opinion

Environment

As illustrated by the cartoon, two tourists are throwing the rubbish, and there are (is) so many (much) rubbish floating on the water. Bottles, foods and some other things. The water looks so dirty! I think this cartoon is better to present a truth that sometimes people really don’t care (about) the environment just care (about) ourselves. 

This phenomenon aroused a great concern. People like to travel because it can broaden their horizon. But some tourists’ behavior (is) really harmful e(s)pecially for our environment. (Is) protecting the environment and developing our economy is really hard to balance? Such dilemma we are often confront(ed) within our daily life. Our plant is already in a dire strait. If we don’t protect (it), the problem of our civilization will get worse and worse. But our country’s goal is to foster and implement a scientific thinking on development and make a resource-concerning and environment friendly society. So I think we should do our best to respond our country’s policy.

Thus, I think our society should enhance the policy’s strength, and the tourism industry should pay more attention to the tourists’ behaviors. Last but not the least, tourists themselves should care (about) the environment, know the seriously consequence(s) if we don’t protect the environment. I think this is the most important thing.

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Environment

As illustrated by the cartoon, two tourists are throwing trash into the river, not caring that it is already seriously polluted by bottles, garbage, and some other things. The water looks so dirty! I think this cartoon presents an unfortunate truth: that all too often tourists  do not care about the environment they are in, just so long as one has an enjoyable time.

This phenomenon has aroused a passionate concern. People like to travel because it can broaden their horizons, but some tourists’ behavior is  harmful, especially for the environment. Is it truly so hard to balance protecting the environment and developing a country's economy? Such a dilemma is one that we are often confronting within  daily life. The planet is already in a dire strait. If we do not protect it, the problems of all countries will get worse and worse. China's goal is to foster and implement scientific thinking on development, as well as to make a resource-conserving and environmentally friendly society. Thus, I think we should try to respect China's policy.

Therefore, I think the government  should strengthen the policy’s enforcement. Similarly, the tourism industry should devote more attention to educating the tourists’ behaviors, not just continue taking their money. Finally, tourists, themselves, should care about the environment world-wide, not just in their own countries, and understand the serious consequences of not protecting the earth's natural resources. I think this is the most valuable lesson.

Another good essay and an excellent topic! Keep writing and posting! Remember: Quality over quanity! The changes and/or additions and/or rewordings I made were a result of my interpretation of what I felt you were trying to write. Sincerest apologies if my intrepretation were mistaken. J.