when　i am staring at me in the mirror. transparent blood begins flowing in trembling my body, and it entwire pale your heart. i collect final tears which disappear into hallucination and doze in blood ocean.

x-japan.

I am staring at myself in the mirror. My trembling body begins flowing in transparent blood, which entwire twists your heart . I collect final tears which disappear into hallucination and doze in blood ocean.

I don't speak japanese, so I tried to check your english grammar instead. Remember to use capital letters after a period (in blue).

Entwire isn't really a word, but maybe you tried to use "twist". Twist is a verb that affects a subject, which is the "heart". Therefore we must conjugate the verb adding a "s" at the end of the word (twists your heart).

The same rule applies to the verb begin. This verb affects the subject "trembling body".

Keep going on your english!! :))

x-japan.

i am staring at me of mirror. transparent blood begin flowing in trembring my body, and it entwire pale your heart. i collect final tears which disappear into hallucination and doze in blood ocean.

鏡を見つめながら震える体に流れ始めた透き通る血を青白いお前の心に絡ませ幻覚に消えて行く最後の涙を拾い集めて血の海にまどろむー

x-japan.

i am staring at me of mirror. transparent blood begin flowing in trembring my body, and it entwire pole your heart. i collect final tears which disappear into hallucination and doze in blood ocean.

鏡を見つめながら震える体に流れ始めた透き通る血を青白いお前の心に絡ませ幻覚に消えて行く最後の涙を拾い集めて血の海にまどろむー