First notebook entry: Introducing myself
The rusting of the morning stars. For what it's worth? The shine of moon in eyes or your soul?
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Thanx for correction! Спасбо
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Beautiful. In poetry, you must learn how to indent properly.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
The rusting of the morning stars. For what it's worth? The shine of moon in eyes or your soul?
The rusting of morning stars. I prefer, "waning"
For what's its worth?
The moonlight in thy eyes
Or in thy soul?
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Correction 1: (If you are trying to be artistic or poetic) The rusting of the morning stars. What is it worth? The shine of the moon in your eyes or in your soul?
Correction 2: (If you are going for sentence completeness) Is the rusting of the morning stars worth the shine of the moon in your eyes and in your soul?
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