First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Jio, and although I'm from Korea I'm now I'm living in Shanghai for work.

첫 글자를 이름마다의 모두  대문자로 써야 해요..

언제 글자 "i"가 혼자라면, "i"는 항상 대문자로 셔야 해요. 항상. 

잊지 마세요.

I'm looking forward to making friends (here) that can help me learn English.

 Of course I <<<< can help you with your Korean.

If you're interested, feel free to contact me. Thanks!  우리는 구두점은 전에 띄어쓰기를 사용하지 않아요.

그건대문자로써야합니다. 

바꿔쓸수있는표현은제가추천하는더자연스럽고일반적인방법의표현입니다.

오타, 또는수정이필요한부분그리고단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다. 

밑줄이있을때는알맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.

보라색이저의코멘트입니다.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Jio and I am from Korea. But now I'm living now in Shanghai for my work. I'm looking forward to make friends with people that who can help me in learning English. Sure I can help you with your Korean. If you are interested feel free to contact me. Thanks !

I hope it could help you a lot in improving your English learning. Thank you.