First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello everyone,I'm very happy to communicate with you here.I'm a Chinese girl and my English name is Jolandy.I'm studying English in Bohai University.To speak with friends who speak English as their mother tongue is my dream.But my English is poor now.I wish you can help me and I will be happy to teach you Chinese.Thanks for reading,my dear friends.
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你的英文完美 （一点也不差）。但是communicate是有点正式，I'm very happy to communicate （talk or speak 比较好) with you here
Hello Jolandy，your English is almost perfect (not poor at all). I think that "communicate" sounds a little too formal and unnatural though, "talk" or "speak" would sound better.
Hello Jolandy，your English is almost perfect (not poor at all). I think that "communicate" sounds a little too formal and unnatural though, "talk" or "speak" would sound better.
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hihihih so nice *_*
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