About my family
My family have 6 persons, my parent are both sixty-five years old and live with me in Beijing, my first sister is fourty-one years old who married 11 years ago and live in Haerbin, my second sister is 39 years old and live in Mudanjiang, my young sister is 34 years old who is pregnant now and will be a mother on October, at last I am 37 years old, work and live in beijing, I love my family, and they love me too.
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About My Family Capitalize the words in your title.
My family have 6 persons,1 There are six in my family. Both my parents are both sixty-five years old and live with me in Beijing. My first oldest sister is fourty-one years old 2 of age and is who married 11 for eleven years ago and they live in Haerbin. My second sister is thirty nine 39 years old and lives in Mudanjiang. My youngest sister is 34 years old who is pregnant now and will be a young mother of thirty four. I am going to be an uncle on October. , at last I am 37 thirty seven years old. I work and live in Beijing. I love my family, and they love me too.
1. We don't say this. Of course your family compose of human beings. You are inferring that they are not.
2. This is not wrong but English good writing demands varied sentence structures.
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From the traditional sense, they still belong to my family..haha
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Your sisters have married; do you still call them belong to your family?
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I am an accountant.
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what do you do in your life?
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