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Beijing Trip // Chinese (Mandarin, practice) 我第一次去到北京的时候是2007年的初夏。虽然只是五月,天气热得盛夏一样。只要我抵达后,就想首先去看紫禁城。应为包括我对不少人紫禁城是中国的象征一样。以前我会看到那个通过电影后者照片而已。还有紫禁城比我所预期的大得多。当然在韩国或在日本有那些成,但这是不可能比较两个的大小。 // English (practice) Beijing Trip It was early summer of 2007 which I visited Beijing for the first time. The weather was hot like mid-summer, though it was just May. I was so eager to see the Forbidden City for the first, as soon as I had arrived in Beijing. Because the Forbidden City is like symbol of China to many people including me. The Forbidden City, which I had seen via movies or photos only, was greater than I expected. Of course there are such palaces in Korea or Japan, however it was not acceptable to compare the size of them with that of the Forbidden City. // Korean (Mother tongue) 베이징 여행. 처음 베이징을 방문한 것은 2007년 초여름이었다. 5월이었음에도 날씨는 이미 한 여름처럼 뜨거웠다. 베이징에 도착하면, 제일 먼저 자금성을 보고 싶었다. 왜냐하면, 나를 포함한 많은 사람에게 있어서, 자금성은 중국의 상징과 같은 존재이기 때문이다. 이전까지 영화나 사진으로만 보던 자금성은 실제로 상상 이상으로 거대했다. 물론 한국이나 일본에도 궁궐이 있지만, 그 크기에 있어서는 자금성에 비할 바가 아니었다.

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Beijing Trip


// Chinese (Mandarin, practice)
我第一次去到北京的时候是2007年的初夏。虽然只是五月,天气热得盛夏一样。只要我一抵达后,就想首最想先去看紫禁城。应因为包括我在内的对不少人对紫禁城的看法是它是中国的象征一样。以前我会看到的是那个些通过电影后者期处理的照片而已。还有紫禁城比我所预期的大得多。当然在韩国或在日本有那一些成城,但这是不可能比较两个的大小很难比较。

// English (practice)
Beijing Trip

It was early summer of 2007 which I visited Beijing for the first time. The weather was hot like mid-summer, though it was just May. I was so eager to see the Forbidden City for the first, as soon as I had arrived in Beijing, because the Forbidden City is like a symbol of China to for many people including me. The Forbidden City, which I had seen via movies or photos only, was greater than I expected. Of course there are such palaces in Korea or Japan, however it was they were not acceptable to compare the size of them with that of the Forbidden City.

// Korean (Mother tongue)
베이징 여행.

처음 베이징을 방문한 것은 2007년 초여름이었다. 5월이었음에도 날씨는 이미 한 여름처럼 뜨거웠다. 베이징에 도착하면, 제일 먼저 자금성을 보고 싶었다. 왜냐하면, 나를 포함한 많은 사람에게 있어서, 자금성은 중국의 상징과 같은 존재이기 때문이다. 이전까지 영화나 사진으로만 보던 자금성은 실제로 상상 이상으로 거대했다. 물론 한국이나 일본에도 궁궐이 있지만, 그 크기에 있어서는 자금성에 비할 바가 아니었다.

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Beijing Trip


// Chinese (Mandarin, practice)
我第一次去到北京的时候是2007年的初夏。虽然只是五月,天气热得盛夏一样。只要我抵达后,就想首先去看紫禁城。应为包括我对不少人紫禁城是中国的象征一样。以前我会看到那个通过电影后者照片而已。还有紫禁城比我所预期的大得多。当然在韩国或在日本有那些成,但这是不可能比较两个的大小。

我第一次到北京是2007年的初夏。虽然只是五月,天气热得盛夏一样。我一到就想先去看紫禁城。因为不少人包括我都认为紫禁城是中国的象征。以前通过电影看到紫禁城觉得就只有照片那么大而已,实际上比我预期的大得多。当然在韩国或日本也有那些城,但这两个是不能和紫禁城比较大小的。

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