Dalian's Weather

Today's weather is very good. AnyEverywhere is filled of with spring.  It is better to say, "spring is everywhere."  The sun is nice and warm when it shane with shines on my body. It is better to say, "The sun feels nice and warm on my body." But However, everyone would rather stay inside the dormitory or go shopping than go to take a walk.

You need to work on your mechanics of the English language.  There is no space before the apostrophe, the comma and the period.  NO space after the apostrophe, one space after the comma and two spaces after the period.  There are more exceptions.  See

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

If you don't understand, ask! :)