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Dear Aubery,
When you study a language, it's good to be outgoing and friendly! It means you aren't shy and afraid to make mistakes. These are also good qualities for a tour guide.
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"Hi, I am an outgoing Chinese girl from Guilin, Guangxi province.
I'm still in my university to studying English, and that my major is Tourism English.
Maybe I will be a tour guide in the future.
So, have you heard about Guilin or Yangsuo?
I think it's very beautiful in my city.
There are many foreigners be drawn to Guilin.
If you come here, maybe I will be your tour guide.
I like music, and my singing is not bad.
If you like musictoo, I'd like to sing with you, and I can introduce some beautiful Chinese songs to you.
I hope you like the friendly girl whose name is Aubery .
It's me."
Good luck in your studies!
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