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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i wanna learning my self how can speak english very good and i wanna have a new friends cause i like know a friends my name is tofe and my old is 23 and i living in iraq and i fnish my collge in iraq eng_electronic and i work in Company for the advertisement of medicines, medical

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I wanna (want to) learning my+self how to speak english very well,
and I wanna (want to) have a new friends because I like to know afriends.
My name is tofe

and my age is 23
and I am living in Iraq
and I finished my college in iraq eng_electronic
and I work in a company for the advertisement of medicines.
__________________________

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to learn myself how to speak english very well,
and I want to have new friends because I like to know friends.
My name is tofe

and my age is 23
and I am living in Iraq
and I finished my college in iraq eng_electronic
and I work in a company for the advertisement of medicines.
__________________________

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I think your college degree would translate to "electrical engineer" but I'm not certain. One of my good friends is studying for that degree too, here in America, and he is taking a lot of math classes right now.
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i wanna learning my self how can speak english very good and i wanna have a new friends cause i like know a friends my name is tofe and my old is 23 and i living in iraq and i fnish my collge in iraq eng_electronic and i work in Company for the advertisement of medicines, medical any if any one wanna talk with me by voice and cam my skype is fifo.love89 and welcome
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You did good, but I'm going to make a few corrections.

 

Original:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i wanna learning my self how can speak english very good
and i wanna have a new friends cause i like know a friends
my name is tofe
and my old is 23
and i living in iraq
and i fnish my collge in iraq eng_electronic
and i work in Company for the advertisement of medicines, medical

 

Revised:

I want to(wanna) learn how to speak English very well and I want to make new friends because I like knowing friends. My name is Tofe and I'm 23 years old. I live in Iraq and I'm finishing college in Iraq eng_electronics. I work for a company that creates advertisements for medicines and other medical related things.

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