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My Family
I have got a big family. My mother is called Irina, and she is forty. She is a shop assistant in a large Moscow store. My father is called Sacha, and He is forty-four. He is a security guard. I also have got a brother. He is a student. I am a student as well, but I also have a work. I like my job because I can see the whole world. I am a flight attendant.
Nice!
I do realise that "have got" is being taught these days, but this is a huge mistake. You'll do much better by simply using "have".
My Family Capitalize all first letters of the words in a title.
I have got a big family. My mother, called Irina she is forty years old. She is a shop assistant with a big Moscow department store 1 shop. My father called is Sacha. He is forty four, he is and a security guard. I have got a My brother. He is a student. I am a student too and but am also i have a working. I like my job because I can see all the world. for I am a cabin flight attendant. (An older term is "air/flight hostess")
1. What you wrote is not wrong. A department store sounds more glamorous than just a shop or a store.
my family
I have got a big family. My mother is called Irina she is forty. she is a shop assistent in a big shop in Moscow. My father is called Sacha He is forty four, he is a security guard. I have got a brother. He is a student. I am student too and also i have a work. I like my job becouse i can see all the world. I am a cabin attendant
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