Introducing myself

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I'm Luna from Japan. I am here to learn English and want to help others with (their) Japanese.
I have had own my own Business exactly for exactly 6 years. I'm a lecturer of (in) corporate training, and consulting and writting. [1]

My hobby is fula dance (I enjoy fula dancing/Fula dancing is one of my hobbies), and my favorite places is are bookstores and museums (the bookstore and the museum).

[1] If you lecture in 'corporate training,' 'corporate consulting' and 'corporate writing', a sentence like the one above is fine: I give lectures on corporate training, consulting and writing. If you lecture in 'corporate training,' 'consulting' and 'writing,' you can make this clear by putting the items in a different order: I am a lecturer of consulting, writing and corporate training. If it's 'corporate training,' 'corporate consulting' and 'writing': I am a lecturer in writing, corporate training and (corporate) consulting. or I'm a lecturer in writing as well as in corporate training and consulting.

I had never heard of Fula Dancing until now, Luna. If you have any questions about or criticisms of my correction, please leave me a comment :) Have a nice night～

MY SUGGESTED CORRECTIONS:

I'm Luna from Japan. I am here to learn English, and I want to help others with Japanese.

I have own had my own business exactly for exactly 6 six years. I'm lecture of do corporate training, and as well as consulting and writting writing.

A general rule for nontechnical writing is that "whole numbers from one through one hundred, round numbers, and any number beginning a sentence" is spelled out (from Chigago Manual of Style, p. 380).

My hobby is fula dance hula dancing. My favorite places is are bookstores and museums.

I'm guessing that you really meant hula dancing, since Hawaii is a popular destination for Japanese people and there are even hula dancing classes in Japan.