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About TV program I watched today,and my feeling. I had been watching a TV program until just a few minutes ago.The content is that other countries singers sing J-POP.I was moved to tears by it.I realized many other countries people love Japan for the first time.I thought the songs they sang must be unsurpassed!!I had more incentive afresh.Definitely definitely definitely definitely I will go to Finland to study,work,and live!!

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This is about a TV program I watched today, and my feelings about it.(I wasn't sure if you had intended to make this into a full sentence or not, but I corrected it anyways)

I had been watching a TV program until just a few minutes ago. The content is was that other countriey's(to make a word possesive you just add " 's " to the unchanged noun) singers sing J-POP. I was moved to tears by it. I realized many other countriey's people love Japan for the first time. I thought the songs they sang must be unsurpassed!! I had have a more fresh incentive afresh(although not technically wrong it sounds better this way). Definitely, definitely, definitely, definitely I will go to Finland to study, work, and live!!

 

This is about a TV program I watched today and my feeling about it.

I had been watching a TV program until just a few minutes ago. The content was that other country's singers sing J-POP. I was moved to tears by it. I realized, for the first time, that many other country's people love Japan. I thought the songs they sang must be unsurpassed!! I now have a more fresh incentive. Definately, definately, definately, definately, I will go to Finland to study, work and live!!

 

Well written :) Not too many errors.

And of course! Japan is a very unique and interesting country! There is no wonder why people would love to learn about it :D

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