Driving
The time is 10:40p.m.
I've been busy these days... I'm stressful------!! εε=ヽ( `Д´)ﾉWaaahhh!
So I had a drive in the city last night.
I take delight in music in my car.
My favorite singer is Nelly,Keri Hilson,Jay Sean,LMFAO,Chris Browm,
and James Blunt.
I especially like to "High" of James Blunt's song.
I listened to this song at live, last summer.
And I out of my eyes, with emotion!
The song is really soothing♪
Well..I went to home after hanging around the city.
And then I took a photo of Kyoto tower.
Kyoto tower is kyoto's symble.
btw..The tower was modeled on a candle.
The story is well-knowns as in Kyoto.
What did this look like to you?
PS:(Dear iheartwaku.Hi ! Did you get my comment? Thank you as always!)
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(和訳)
ただ今、午後10：40
最近とても忙しいです・・・すーーごくストレス溜まってるよ！！ εε=ヽ( `Д´)ﾉｳｧｧｧﾝ!!
だから昨夜はドライブに行ってきました。
私は車の中で、音楽を聴きます。
私が好きな歌手は、ﾈﾘｰ、ｹﾘｰ・ﾋﾙｿﾝ、ｼﾞｪｲ・ｼｰﾝ、LMFAO、ｸﾘｽ・ﾌﾞﾗｳﾝ、
そしてｼﾞｪｲﾑｽ・ﾌﾞﾗﾝﾄです。
特にジェイムス・ブラントの「ハイ」が大好きです。
私は、去年の夏彼のライブでこの曲を聴きました。
そして、感動のあまり涙がこぼれました。
この音楽は本当に癒されます♪
さて、街中をうろうろした後、私は帰宅しました。
そして京都タワーの写真を撮りました。
京都タワーは京都のシンボルです。
ちなみに、タワーのモデルはろうそくです。
京都では有名な話なんですよ。
あなたは何に見えましたか？
追伸：( iheartwakuへ。ハイ！もうコメントは見てくれた？いつもありがとう！)
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Driving
The time is 10:40p.m.
I've been busy these days... I'm stressfuled------!! εε=ヽ( `Д´)ﾉWaaahhh!
So I had a drive in the city last night.
I take delight listening to in music in my car.
My favorite singers isare Nelly,_Keri Hilson,_Jay Sean,_LMFAO,_Chris Browmn,
and James Blunt.
My favorite singers are Nelly, Keri Hilson, Jay Sean, LMFAO, Chris Brown and James Blunt.
I especially like to "High" of James Blunt's song "High".
I especially like James Blunt's song "High".
I listened to this song at live, last summer.
I listened to this song live last summer.
And I cried out of my eyes, with in emotion!
And I cried out in emotion!
The song is really soothing♪
Well.._I went to home after hanging around the city.
And then I took a photo of Kyoto tower.
Kyoto tower is kKyoto's symbleol.
Kyoto tower is Kyoto's symbol.
btw.._The tower was modelled onafter a candle.
btw.. The tower was modelled after a candle.
The story is well-knowns as in Kyoto.
What did this look like to you?
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