The Reality Mirror.
Stand in front of a mirror
Imagine yourself after (……) years
Look deeply without terror
Stare with no fear
Unfortunately, there's no error
This is you my dear
Do you see a smile of cheer?
Or a fallen tears?!
Did you become a pioneer?
Or you still nothing with no career?!
Do you even see yourself?
Or you had disappeared?!!
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The Reality Mirror.
Stand in front of a mirror
Imagine yourself after (……) years
Look deeply without terror
Stare with no fear
Unfortunately, there's no error
This is you my dear
Do you see a smile of cheer?
Or a fallen (falling) tears?!
Did you become a pioneer?
Or are you still nothing with no career?!
Do you even see yourself?
Or have you had disappeared?!!
Nice poem! I like the title.
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@ Sunny @ Literature in motion: Thaaaaaaaaanks alot sunny , i'm so glad because you liked it :)) :))
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Such a great poem. I enjoyed it very much!
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＂ we should always be honest with ourselves and be aware of our faults & our disadvantages, so that we can overcome that negative sides in our characters & improve the positive ones. ＂
Not only I like your poem, but also I like the above words:))
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:)))))
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