Jennie's notebook entry: Aug 02, 2010
Today it is the first day I wrote in here. I decided to keep writing daily in here from now on. Hopefully I can keep it. Next week, I will have several relatives to visit shanghai and they will live in my house. It is very very hot now in shanghai, but I have not bought air-conditioner in my house. So I am thinking I have to buy it asap . so many people crowding in my house and sleeping, it will be very uncomfortable because of this kind of terrible weather .
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Jennie's notebook entry: Aug 02, 2010
Today it is the first day I wrote in here. I have decided to keep writing daily in here from now on. Hopefully I can keep it up. Next week, I will have several relatives to visit shanghai and they will live (or "be living") in my house. It is very very hot now in shanghai,notes: "but" is used to join two short ideas that oppose each other, otherwise use "and"
Example: I enjoy my relatives company but I was glad when they went home.
Example: I enjoy my relatives company and I was sad to see them leave.
(Pretty good jennie, I think you are intermediate to advanced)
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